Claire King


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Website make-over

Posted on: July 22nd, 2012 by Claire - 11 Comments

I’m having a make over.

The plan is to have an author website where news, book info etc can be found, as well as a link to my blog for those that are interested in my ramblings. The address will stay the same.

Here is the homepage work in progress. It’s based on a new wordpress theme that my clever husband has made. If you’re on your phone the blocks should appear in a column, on a tablet perhaps in a double column and on a computer in 3×3 format. But otherwise none of the links etc work yet and the text is placeholders. What do you think?

Is there anything that bugs you about author pages or websites that we should take into account? All thoughts at this stage gratefully received!



10 Things Fiction Writers Can Learn From Fairy Tales.

Posted on: July 17th, 2012 by Claire - 7 Comments

So, I’ve been reading short story submissions again, and it’s got me thinking. Where does the magic come from in fiction? What can we learn from the seemingly simple stories that stand the test of time, that readers love and remember? What can writers learn from fairy tales? My thoughts:

1. It’s not real! You can tell this in a fairytale because of the dragons and the fairies. You don’t need fairies in your story, but as a fiction writer you are asking the reader to suspend disbelief and be swept up by their imagination. So use your imagination and don’t do them the disservice of serving up thinly disguised memoir.

2. Once upon a time is all you need for set up. Then you can bring the reader right into the story. Please.

3. A prince is a prince. He very rarely has a manly stride or eyes like polished steel. He’s a prince. Thank you, let’s move on. Likewise, the poor villagers are poor. Again, we get it. We don’t need the miserable backstory of their entire lives. The witch has bony fingers. You don’t need to tell me what shade of grey her dress is.

4. Some of the Piggies get eaten. Try and strike a balance between dwelling on this too much (it is not the moral of the story) and wrapping your reader in cotton wool euphemisms. Readers will feel the fear and read on despite because of it.

5. We are cheering for the hero so let them be heroic. I’m not saying don’t make them work for it, but put them to work for heaven’s sake. Ineffectual characters who stop trying are wholly unsatisfactory and uninspiring.

6. Morals are simple. We can read a fairy tale written hundreds of years ago and still understand the moral. Don’t hide the moral in whatever you want the reader to feel for you, the writer. This is not your story.

7. Choose your battles. Fairy tales seem to find an excellent balance between simple prose that keeps the story pacy and the occasional delightful description, name or or piece of dialogue that adds setting and character. I’m reading the wonderful ‘Song of Achilles’ at the moment and it has exactly the same quality. So don’t try and be too clever, choose your language battles carefully.

8. A well-drawn character becomes real. Children adopt fairy tale characters, both good and evil, and imitate them. Will your reader ever say “What would (insert name of your protaganist) do?”

9. Dragons can be beaten. G.K. Chesterton put this beautifully when he said “Fairy tales are more than true; not because they tell us that dragons exist, but because they tell us that dragons can be beaten.” Which leads us to:

10. Happily ever after. But falling in love is not the same as slaying the dragon. That is called a subplot. We need resolution. Whatever the dragon is, get it slain (or ride it, of course). If you’ve seen Tim Burton’s version of Alice in Wonderland…well that’s resolution right there.

The landscape inside a single man.

Posted on: July 4th, 2012 by Claire - 5 Comments

“Le paysage est si vaste à l’intérieur d’un seul homme que toutes les contradictions y veulent vivre et y ont place.” Christiane Singer, in her book “Où cours-tu? Ne sais-tu pas que le ciel est en toi?”

I wanted to share something with you. An inspiration, a piece of wisdom that I came across recently and found perfectly beautiful.

Christiane Singer was a French author, who wrote prolifically until her death in 2007. Her works include much exploration of spirituality and philosophy. I had never heard of her until last week, and I’ve not been able to find English translations of her work, sadly, but here is my translation of the quote above:

“The landscape is so vast inside a single man that all contradictions must live there and have their place.”

It is taken from her book “Where are you running to? Don’t you know heaven is within you?”

Isn’t that an amazing image? That inside every one of us – every one of our characters – is a self-contained, vast universe, where raging storms, parched canyons, soft rolling hills and tidal seas exist together. Doesn’t that inspire you to write?

It’s also perfectly in tune with the novel I’m editing at the moment, which asks a lot of questions about what really lies within us. It’s a big question for a writer. Indeed, for anyone.

Who are these photos of?

These photos are of the theatre/circus company Cielo who introduced me to this quote recently in a local nature reserve, and so inspired this post.